Monday, October 29, 2012

Patriot's Pen Letter Discusion


Patriot's Pen Letter Discussion

Dear Founding Fathers,

We thank you for the Constitution and the Bill of Rights. They are still as meaningful as when you wrote them. Thank you for letting us have a democratic government and a freedom of religion. We appreciate everything you have done, especially your great courage and determination.

Thank you for allowing us to bear arms. One of the things that concern me about our already outstanding country that I think we need to improve on and fix is gun control. Gun control is something that should be discussed more in America. The citizens of the United States need to feel they're protected and feel safe in this country. If this is not discussed more often the citizens of the United States are  in danger because more and more deaths will occur. Clearly, This needs to be discussed and a solution found.

Unemployment is becoming more and more of a concern to people, knowing they are not going to have enough money to raise their family and make a living. Our country must do something about it before it gets out of hand. All we need is to have more jobs available to put an end to this which then won't give these people such tough times.

No more of the things lacking in America. Now let's talk about what's is great about America. I thank you for giving  everyone a freedom of religion because who knows what are country would be like if we didn't have that. No one should be punish for what religion they believe in because that's not right.

Once again, thank you for what you have done for this country. We appreciate every second of it and we hope you understand how much we appreciate you for what you did for the United States. I hope you got some ideas of how we can improve our incredible country.  


1 comment:

  1. you had a very good voice in the story. Fantastic effect and keep up the good work danny boyyyy

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